Alix, your getting there. I know it takes time to make a webpage th
looks great and exciting. I reworked your discription and took ou some of the pork. Remember your writing an ad not a billboard. Mos people viewing the net on a browser look as far as the first page an scrolling just add to there frustration. You added the contac information which is good along with the shipping. Just fo suggestions you may want to take an image into PhotoShop and add th contact info and paypal information. This does not have to be linke yet just use it as a logo. Bring the price up to just below the log with something like "Introductory price of only $64 US!" Make thi in bold and use it as a leader and leave the font size as is. Cut dow the size of the font you are using for the discription this will hel reduce the size of the page. you may wish to re-size the images an put them in a table like 3 across and two down or more across.
These are only my suggestions so take them for what it is worth bu your starting to look good and the page is coming togeather.
The Vendetta was designed to go where the IFO left off and wher foamies can't. The graceful modern and nostalgic shapes were generated for a tough biplane an extreme indoor aerobatics. The exercise turned out to be a multipurpose high performance Indoor-Outdoo parkflyer. The shape is our view of what a modern Beech Aircraft Staggerwing would look like equipped with turboprop.
The Vendetta is an airplane with lighter wing loading than the bes foamies yet with the same strenght as the legendary IFO. Combining a mixture of three of the highes strength to weight ratio materials: Ripstop, Balsa and Carbon fiber. It is designed to survive close encounters wit indoor walls, floors or the occasional foamy without a scratch! A generous side area for walkin speed Knife Edge, along with generous rudder area. It will flat spin and flat turn on a whim! The model ca be flown by expert pilots that would like to develop their rudder skills and novices with previous building an flying experience. The top wing position allows for unprecedented stall resistance and unbelievably stabl Harrier.
The cleanness of the airframe (no servos, batteries or receivers ar sticking out) plus the large wingspan and wing area even allows the aircraft to catch thermals..
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