Uh-huh. If you say so, but it really begs the question "Why would anyone post a fallacious correction?" For what purpose?
Who's Nobody?
Incorrect? Are you sure they didn't just say that it was unnecessarily wordy, bloated, and indirect? If the Watergate scandal taught us anything, it's that grammatical expletives should be deleted.
Now you're just talking nonsense. What's a sparkie?